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Roleplay Fail
May. 6th, 2009 08:47 amI've been deciphering these posts for 3 days now and I have yet to comprehend any of it. I'm really considering making a complete web page on 'how-not-to-write.' None of this makes sense. NONE of it.
Excerpt: Sunset Road to Nowhere
His elegant light blue armani shirt was lapelwith the sleeves for half on the forearm while had distractedly unbuttoned the buttons on the collar allowing to glimpse few the skin of his neck and a sketch more down. Quietly staying in that elegant position seemed to not give attention at nothing..
If you can decipher this please let me know. More fail coming soon.
Excerpt: Sunset Road to Nowhere
His elegant light blue armani shirt was lapelwith the sleeves for half on the forearm while had distractedly unbuttoned the buttons on the collar allowing to glimpse few the skin of his neck and a sketch more down. Quietly staying in that elegant position seemed to not give attention at nothing..
If you can decipher this please let me know. More fail coming soon.
